as i have said, i think you have marked progress in expressing yourself visually and asethetically. generally speaking, the pictures are quite nicely framed. aslo a good attempt to use brigtness, color and shapes as symbols. but now i think the story is too one to one, in the sense that almost every picture has its correspondent, which result the reduction of ambiguity which is indeed a form of attraction. Therefore, if you do this again in the future, you may try using doing the parellel with different objects and locations that connect yet disconnect. Like instead of taking the same lock, i may try to shot another lock in a bigger gate, etc.
as i have said, i think you have marked progress in expressing yourself visually and asethetically. generally speaking, the pictures are quite nicely framed. aslo a good attempt to use brigtness, color and shapes as symbols. but now i think the story is too one to one, in the sense that almost every picture has its correspondent, which result the reduction of ambiguity which is indeed a form of attraction. Therefore, if you do this again in the future, you may try using doing the parellel with different objects and locations that connect yet disconnect. Like instead of taking the same lock, i may try to shot another lock in a bigger gate, etc.
ReplyDeleteBut still your work marks a good start