i can feel the sadness. In that sense it is a nice work as it can convey a kind of emotion to the audiences. Moreover, the use of the ballet dancer accessory makes a good choreography between the two props. Also, I appeciate the use of top angle for the ballet doll so the broken arm is not revealed clearly in the begining, but getting clearer when you use an eye level angle.
The video can be better treated in some area, though. first, the meaning of the leaflet and the book are not that comprehensible, also the treatment is a bit dull. while i know that it's difficult to do it on your own, i will suggest you use a torch as the spotlight to highlight some part of the leaflet only, so as to make a dramatic feeling. Moreover, I may try to use a white floor instead of the wooden one even the later resembles the stage as it makes the whole video more clean and abstract. Of course, the result needed to be tested.
i can feel the sadness. In that sense it is a nice work as it can convey a kind of emotion to the audiences. Moreover, the use of the ballet dancer accessory makes a good choreography between the two props. Also, I appeciate the use of top angle for the ballet doll so the broken arm is not revealed clearly in the begining, but getting clearer when you use an eye level angle.
ReplyDeleteThe video can be better treated in some area, though. first, the meaning of the leaflet and the book are not that comprehensible, also the treatment is a bit dull. while i know that it's difficult to do it on your own, i will suggest you use a torch as the spotlight to highlight some part of the leaflet only, so as to make a dramatic feeling. Moreover, I may try to use a white floor instead of the wooden one even the later resembles the stage as it makes the whole video more clean and abstract. Of course, the result needed to be tested.