actually the idea is good, although the way you filmed it is influenced by my former student's work.
However, as you noticed as well, without tripod to fix the camera the images become so jumpy and seriously affect the visual result.
Another thing that you may consider is the theme of identity. as you have presented in the class, one message that you want to bring out is the loss of identity despite of momental satisaction from the cosplay. This is a theme with huge potential but your presentation cannot really express this point. Adding a scene when the "doll" goes out and enjoy the life to contrast with the uncertainty look at the end may help.
actually the idea is good, although the way you filmed it is influenced by my former student's work.
ReplyDeleteHowever, as you noticed as well, without tripod to fix the camera the images become so jumpy and seriously affect the visual result.
Another thing that you may consider is the theme of identity. as you have presented in the class, one message that you want to bring out is the loss of identity despite of momental satisaction from the cosplay. This is a theme with huge potential but your presentation cannot really express this point. Adding a scene when the "doll" goes out and enjoy the life to contrast with the uncertainty look at the end may help.